Goals for Wednesday, June 6:
Edit the ms for smoothness and coherence; work on the ending


Assessment of Goals:
I now have another version that I also edited on paper.  I will implement the changes, probably make more changes, and send it out to my first reader (a Venezuelan of Italian ancestry who is my Italian conversation partner).  Next week I will send it to another Sicilian American heritage travel writer, who lives in Michigan, whom I met at a writer's camp and we became friends.  I also might send it to my brother and sister.