Assessment of goals for June 5:
I finished an entire draft--it's over 4000 words and 12 pages, but I'm not happy with the conclusion, with the sustained conveyance of the tradition/experience theme, and parts of it are clunky and perhaps superfluous.


Goals for June 5:
Work on the above issues of conclusion and theme, as well as on awkwardness and relevance of details and events.  Read it over out loud (in my office) to make edits.


Assessment of goals for June 5: