Friday, June 10, 2022

 June 10 Last Day of Camp

I wrote 1700 words toward an essay about the indoor pool as an unnatural place and experience and contrasted it with the Lake as a possibly more natural place.  It's a little clunky and too long, so I'll print it off and read it aloud today to edit it. 

To prepare for the interview of  one of President Wilson's PR guys on Tuesday, I will write up questions for him. 

I will respond to one of my previous interviewees, David Hamilton, Professor Emeritus in English, who wrote back to me after I asked him if he remembered the Ryan Report of 1979. He didn't. He's one of the few faculty still alive who can remember something about the period I'm studying-- 1979 to 1984--and one of the few UI faculty members who was not only interested in Writing across the Curriculum, but taught a WAC course called Writing for Biologists and published articles about it, and conducted WAC workshops at the University of Southern Alabama. 

Thursday, June 9, 2022

 June 9 

Goals for today:

I am switching back to creative writing to write an essay on an unnatural place--that is, the places where most of us spend most of our time (unless we are forest rangers): e.g., climate controlled buildings like EPB where the windows don't even open, which means they are too hot in the winter and require employees to bring fans, and too cold in the summer requiring us to bundle up in sweaters and hoodies.  I'm going to write about the indoor pool where I swim and maybe contrast it with where I want to swim once I develop enough stamina--with the I-Cows at Lake McBride. Let's face it: swimming laps in a chlorinated pool is a highly unnatural experience. 

Wednesday, June 8, 2022

 June 8 

Today's goal: To continue working on organizing docs for a time line.

For the third WAC moment, I am still organizing all the emails and documents into a timeline from Feb 2020 until August 2021 for a time line. I'm realizing that were the following key events from my point of view: 

 1) The acceptance by CLAS of 5 Writing University pre-proposals of very different proposals and proposers, tasked by CLAS to work together on a Mega-proposal for the P3; 

2) The formation of an Obermann Writing University working group composed of the 5 proposing teams to put together that megaproposal; 

3) The surprise of finding out another parallel committee was tasked by the Provost with the same writing/communication mission as ours: the Writing and Communications Committee 

4) Getting myself and other Rhetoric people on that committee; repurposing the Obermann Working Group to focus only on Teaching with Writing across the Curriculum, finding out about Minnesota's program, etc.

5) The second surprise of finding out that there was no source of funding from the Provost's Office for that Writing and Communication committee's proposals and that the only funding available was P3 funding;

6) Working with Rhetoric faculty and CLAS and the rest of the Writing and Communications Committee to put together the P3 proposal, believing what they told us that anything we put together would be accepted.

7) Finding out that the P3 Writing and Communication Proposal was rejected but not finding out why, except that it was rushed and didn't have enough metrics for measuring success.   

Tuesday, June 7, 2022

 June 7  

Assessment of yesterday's goals and today's goal

I read through the brief case of papers related to our place for my essay and was moved and overwhelmed by the last section before ours of the abstract for the property detailing how the previous owners couldn't pay the mortgage or the bills and had to turn it back to the bank.  I had only briefly summarized what happened in 2 sentences in the short version of the essay.

I had a good session at the archives and wrote up what I learned to my colleague who also does archival research on writing instruction. I emailed one of the few people on the 1979 committee who is still alive to get his perspective. 

Today's goals and assessment: I read and printed out earlier emails from the more recent 2020--present moment, again exhausting and started a timeline. 

Monday, June 6, 2022

 June 6

Assessment of goals for June 3 and goals for today: 

Friday I wrote a decent draft about a Natural Place (where I live) although it was more than 1500 words so I worked on cutting it over the weekend.  I know this is the piece I'll want to build on for my final essay, so today I'm going to read a stack of papers pertaining to our property, especially the abstract to see what would be pertinenrt and enlightening to include in the longer version. I'm going to turn my camera off and read the abstracts in a more comfortable place in my study.  

I'm going to the archives again this afternoon to get more material for my historical project. The archives unfortunately are only open until 4:00.  I realized how I need hours in the archive to make sense of the historical moment I'm interested in: the year 1979 in the General Education Program in the College of Liberal Arts and Sciences at the University of Iowa. That is why I've been spending more time on creative writing. 

Friday, June 3, 2022

 June 3

Assessment of yesterday's goals and goals for today:

I finished the revision of the creative piece (which turned out to be a different pice of writing) and emailed my 2800 words of writing to the course instructor, who said she liked it more than the first piece. 

The topic of yesterday's class was the natural environment. She gave us a prompt for 1500 words for next week:  a personal story we tell that involves nature.  This morning, I started writing about moving from Chicago to rural Iowa and plan to get as much written as possible.  We need to finish and send it by Tuesday so we can read the stories of two other members of the class and give them feedback. 

Thursday, June 2, 2022

 June 2

Assessment of yesterday's goals and goals for today: I read and took notes on my chapter and worked on revising my essay to highlight place as a character and include scenes, but in emphasizing the setting (Chicago), it started out long before the events of the previous writing--i.e., when I moved there, so it's starting to be a different piece of writing.  I'll see where it leads me today and maybe it will link up with the previous writing, maybe not. My goals for today are to work exclusively on that creative piece because I spent all yesterday afternoon researching for my academic project.

My visit to University Archives yesterday was successful in that after a half hour with the staff, they found the box that contained the Ryan Report I was looking for, although the finished draft was a yellowed copy of FYI (what is now Iowa Now). So I scanned key pages of a rough draft.  Because it was pre-computer, the rough draft was full of typos and pencil markings. I thought that the content of the Speech, Writing, and Writing in the Major sections would be different in content and language in the final version, but it wasn't.  The content was fascinating. 

I need to go back and copy the report of the Speech and Writing sub committee because they did an amazing survey similar to our recent survey except they surveyed departments rather than faculty, which actually makes more sense.

I'm realizing that there were two writing events in 1979-80 so maybe my article just wants to focus on those because the two projects (the NEH Seminars and the Ryan GER committee) were very different and never came together, although one English professor, Richard, Lloyd-Jones was part of both endeavors. 

Wednesday, June 1, 2022

 Tuesday, June 1

Assessment of yesterday's goals and implications for today's goals:  

I got 2 of those 3 chapters read and took notes on them, but then I received by email a draft of a conference proposal from my research team that I had to give feedback on (it's due today!) that took up half the camp time, so I will read and take notes on the third chapter today.

I spend hours last night printing out emails related to recent committee meetings about writing across the curriculum from 2020 and 2021.  It was exhausting to read them and made me realize how difficult it will be to explain the chaos and confusion of meeting- and proposal-mania to outsiders. I don't want to do more of that printing out today, but maybe I can put the emails in chronological order. I did put them in their own folder.

I worked on my creative writing this morning and need to revise a narrative so that place is prominent and the narrative is organized in place-driven scenes, so I will do that after I finish reading and taking notes on my chapter.  

I'm going to the archives in Special Collections in the Main Library today, which is exciting for me.  I hope I can find the committee report by Marleigh Ryan that I need. I will also pick up a folder of materials from an English professors, Carl Klaus, recently deceased, that my colleague lent me related to the 1979-80 NEH seminars. The plan would be to look at those materials tomorrow. 


Tuesday, May 31, 2022

 Goals for May 31

Read the 3 chapters on Writing in the Disciplines in the book about the 1979-80 NEH seminars at Iowa, Courses for Change and take notes.

If that gets tiring, look for emails from the Writing and Communications Committe, print them out and organize them. 

Tuesday, May 24, 2022

                                                    Summer 2022 Dissertation Camp Blog

Welcome to 2022 Dissertation Camp.  I'm Carol, a Rhetoric professor and director of the Writing Center for many years. I love this camp not only because I get a chance to learn about scholars and writers like you, but because I also can get some work done on my own writing projects!  

About me: One of my favorite activities is keeping up and hanging out with my two bilingual grandaughters, 11 and 4. When I get a chance, I learn languages or at least try to revive my skills in my lapsing ones, Spanish and Italian. I play the drums regularly in church and for Yahoo Drummers events. Swimming is my usual workout.  I swam 100 miles last year to earn an Aquatic Center T-shirt; this year I'm 33 miles on my way to 113 (the equivalent of North Liberty to Des Moines) to earn another one.  I'm working on my endurance so I can one day swim with an open water swimming club called the  I-Cows at Lake McBride, whose swims, guided by kayakers, are 2.1 miles long. You get acclimated to the swims and the club by kayaking, so I'll also have to practice with my own kayak in Coralville Lake, which is just beyond my backyard. 

To launch my summer writing, I'm planning an academic project and a creative one for the camp. I'm prioritizing the first--a history of two periods, the 1980s and the 2020s, when Iowa faculty and administrators almost established a Writing across the Curriculum (WAC) program, but ultimately decided not to. I will use books, articles, and archival material to narrate and compare what happened both times. In the 80s, there was a series of NEH seminars on writing in first-year composition and in the disciplines (like WAC) established by Iowa English faculty for faculty at universities across the US.  Although the English faculty conducted writing across the curriculum workshops at universites and colleges across the US, ironically, they never conducted them here at Iowa. Instead they worked on the literature program and established the Non-Fiction MFA program. Also, the General Education Committee, led by Marleigh Ryan, Professor of Japanese, seriously discussed writing across the curriculum, and wrote up a report, but apparently there was no follow up implementation.  I made an appointment in Special Collections for this week to find and read that report from 1979.  

The second period, the 2020s, there was a series of meetings of two groups, the Writing and Communication Committee composed of Rhetoric, Writing Certificate, and English faculty, and the overlapping Writing University Working Group composed of proposers of selected writing-oriented pre-propoals, to assemble proposals for two sources of funding, one from the Provost and another from what are called "P3" funds from the university's utility agreement with a French company.  After a semester of meetings, the first source of funding was found to be non-existent, obviously a huge communication error between CLAS and the Provost's office. Then our contentiously produced proposal for P3 funds was rejected for reasons I will have to research. I plan to talk to administrators, although their responses so far have been vague and guarded, and print out all the dozens of  emails from those committee deliberations. 

When I mentioned my project and its theme of resistance to Writing across the Curriculum  in my Teaching in a Writing Center class for new tutors, a colleague told me to read a Wall Street Journal best seller called The Human Element that posits friction theory can explain resistance to beneficial ideas for change. The authors are two Northwestern U business professors whose examples and case studies reveal why we act as we do to change.  I've just finished it and will use the four components of Friction Theory to help explain why Writing across the Curriculum was not adopted either time. They are Inertia (the main reason change is so slow in academia); effort (if a change requires more work, academics are likely to reject it because they believe they are already working too hard); emotion (if the change feels imposed upon them and they are not given input or alternatives, they are likely to reject it); and Reactance (push back against pressure to change as a threat to autonomy). This theory also explains why other recent changes made by CLAS for the Rhetoric Dept (that also involve writing instruction), for example, one year instead of three year contracts, restrictions on team teaching and graduate teaching, and increased class sizes, and suggestions that Centers be relocated) are receiving push back as well.  In other words I relate to this book as someone who wants change from faculty and administration and also as part of the audience of faculty that higher administrators want to change.  

If I make progress on this project, reading, taking notes and articulating my ideas, working towards a draft of a paper to present at an October Writing Center conference if my proposal is accepted--I may switch to the creative one, which is for a virtual course I am taking on Thursday afternoons for five weeks, Writing about Place. I may want to write about the Coralville Lake Shore that is part of my "neighborhood" rather than a place I've traveled to by plane or car. This will be my third week and we have to produce 1000 words per week. I've done most of my HW for this week, but I imagine I'll want to use some of the camp for that HW.