I made all of the requested changes and explained why I didn't make a couple of them. I still need to read the article aloud to see if the changes they recommended sound good and make sense, which I will do tomorrow.  Then I can send it back to the editor.


Tomorrow I'd also like to start working on my essay about traveling sola in the Galapagos, based on a travel journal I kept.  That was my third goal for camp.


Today I fulfilled my second goal of the camp--to write a story about tutoring writing in the first grade with some comparisons to tutoring college writing.  I sent it to a couple of friends, who will hopefully send me some feedback. For now I'm planning to send it for the Tutor's Column of Writing Lab Newsletter so I kept it to 1500 words.


The Intro/Review of Lit/Methodology I sent to Deirdre who started adding to the Methodology.